All looks good to me, you’ve obviously been dreaming and planning for some time.
I’d be interested in how you get on with that grip/bar end combo, I’m considering it.
It was mentioned in an early review (C+?) that the standard brakes are fiddly to set up, so I went for the Shimano Deore upgrade. I don’t think anyone suggested a difference in stopping power, which has more to do with pads anyway (I prefer Kool Stop when I can find them and BBB triple compound as a close second choice.) I’ve got the standard chainset, unless you’re counting grams I see no need to upgrade.
My Raven Tour gets used for all sorts, anything from Audax to off roading, to get the best out of it I like to use different tires. 1.5” slicks in the summer, 1.75 Tourguards in the winter and a cheap set of narrow knobblies for snow and off roading. Be aware that SJS fit mudguards with quite close clearances and neatly trim the stays. Using a 1.5” tyre in a mudguard set for 1.75” means it’ll catch slightly less water but won’t clog so easily if you go anywhere muddy. It’s probably not possible and defiantly not safe to fit a 1.75” tyre under mudguards set for 1.5”. If you want the option SJS will fit them higher if you ask. While on the subject, do yourself and your chain a favour and fit a deep mudflap to the front mudguard.
Your gearing looks a bit high for me, it’s a personal thing, but worth checking you’ve done the calculations right. Blackburn racks have a good reputation, but I have a thing about ugly racks, I think they can spoil the look of a bike, so I went for Tubus.
I’m also a fan of hub dynamos, with your list of things you’re going to use the bike for some night riding looks inevitable. I know it’s a big upgrade pricewise, but a lot cheaper than adding one at a later date, I got a Schmidt but the new Shimano have had good reviews and are half the price. I wouldn’t be without, it means the bike is ready to use anytime without thinking about lighting.
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