That proposal doesn't need redrafting, it needs throwing out. That's my full, considered opinion.
Without defending Bobs' unsuccessful joke, which Dan has correctly removed, the problem with these things, George, is that you can't obviate politics from anything to do with road usage. The proposer of the bill, besides being an elected representative, is a Harley-Davidson dealer, and may be presumed to speak for the motorcycle fraternity; that is surely a political consideration and motivation. I'm not planning on discussing it beyond that unless another contributor really wants a debate, but surely reasonable discussion of the motivation of proposers of such radical measures cannot fall under a blanket "political ban".