Welcome to the Mercury club, you've put together a very distinctive looking machine, hope it does everything you're hoping for.
Cabling up the grip shifter with the External Cable Box took a bit of time. I ended up doing it twice as I needed to shorten the cables once I fitted the headlight -- so am now pretty confident that I could do it on the road if necessary...
I can't imagine you'll ever need to, when they start feeling a bit stiff it's an indication they need changing in the next six months or so...
Dynamo lighting
This was a little fiddly -- neat cabling seems almost a contradiction in terms. The SON leaflets could have done with some more illustrations in my opinion but there were plenty of spade connectors and heat-shrink insulation supplied. I might upgrade to a coaxial plug connection in the future if disconnecting the spades when taking the front wheel on an off proves difficult.
Yes it can be fiddly, depends how fussy you are! I heat shrink the rear light run to the brake cable, that's as neat as I can get it and I'm still not happy!
I had some trouble getting the headlight set up in a position where it doesn't interfere with the front V-brake cable and "noodle" holder.
Looks like you got there, though if it doesn't prove satisfactory, an alternative is to use the Brompton bracket and go under the link wire.
I was out on mine yesterday, first time in over a month! A short but lumpy Audax, a great Autumn day to be out and a great bike to be out on.