'Beauty is in the eye of the beholder' and all that.....To my eyes, it looks a right mess.
You have clearly made a great job of the build and I have no doubt that it rides like a dream. Very well done. But all that tape everywhere, including the hose pipe on the rack, just looks awful.
If this was an expedition type of bike I would get the functional/dosen't matter what it looks like aspect, but this is a Thorn Audax, USUALLY one of the best looking bikes around.
Just my 2p......and you did ask.